Edits to the 2020-02-11 update release

diff --git a/update_releases/current/20210211securityrelease.md b/update_releases/current/20210211securityrelease.md
index 35647073c8f557fb111801559afdc8fc145985e8..cd9091d01c2d8fccde1ce44dd95f6497dac76303 100644 (file)
--- a/update_releases/current/20210211securityrelease.md
+++ b/update_releases/current/20210211securityrelease.md
@@ -3,18 +3,17 @@ versions of our database system, including 13.2, 12.6, 11.11, 10.16, 9.6.21, and
 9.5.25. This release closes two security vulnerabilities and fixes over 80 bugs
 reported over the last three months.
 
-Additionally, this is the **final release** of PostgreSQL 9.5. If you are
+Additionally, this is the **final release of PostgreSQL 9.5**. If you are
 running PostgreSQL 9.5 in a production environment, we suggest that you make
 plans to upgrade.
 
 For the full list of changes, please review the
-[release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/release.html).
+[release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/release/).
 
 Security Issues
 ---------------
 
-* CVE-2021-3393: Partition constraint violation errors leak values of denied
-columns
+### CVE-2021-3393: Partition constraint violation errors leak values of denied columns
 
 Versions Affected: 11 - 13.
 
@@ -25,7 +24,7 @@ exploit are more rare.
 
 The PostgreSQL project thanks Heikki Linnakangas for reporting this problem.
 
-* CVE-2021-20229: Single-column SELECT privilege enables reading all columns
+### CVE-2021-20229: Single-column SELECT privilege enables reading all columns
 
 Versions Affected: 13.
 
@@ -42,8 +41,8 @@ The PostgreSQL project thanks Sven Klemm for reporting this problem.
 Bug Fixes and Improvements
 --------------------------
 
-This update also fixes over 80 bugs that were reported in the last several
-months. Some of these issues only affect version 13, but may also apply to other
+This update fixes over 80 bugs that were reported in the last several months.
+Some of these issues only affect version 13, but could also apply to other
 supported versions.
 
 Some of these fixes include:
@@ -52,7 +51,8 @@ Some of these fixes include:
 corrupt index with entries placed in the wrong pages. You should `REINDEX` any
 affected GiST indexes.
 * Fix `CREATE INDEX CONCURRENTLY` to ensure rows from concurrent prepared
-transactions are included in the index.
+transactions are included in the index. Installations that have enabled prepared
+transactions should `REINDEX` any concurrently-built indexes.
 * Fix for possible incorrect query results when a hash aggregation is spilled to
 disk.
 * Fix edge case in incremental sort that could lead to sorting results
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ incorrectly or a "retrieved too many tuples in a bounded sort" error.
 rollback is executed via extended query protocol, such as from prepared
 statements.
 * Fix a failure when a PL/pgSQL procedure used `CALL` on another procedure that
-has `OUT` parameters did not call execute a `COMMIT` or `ROLLBACK`.
+has `OUT` parameters that executed a `COMMIT` or `ROLLBACK`.
 * Remove errors from `BEFORE UPDATE` triggers on partitioned tables for
 restrictions that no longer apply.
 * Several fixes for queries with joins that could lead to error messages such as
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ Notably, the Australia/Currie zone has been corrected to the point where it is
 identical to Australia/Hobart.
 
 For the full list of changes available, please review the
-[release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/release.html).
+[release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/release/).
 
 PostgreSQL 9.5 is EOL
 ---------------------
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ post-update steps; please see the release notes for earlier versions for
 details.
 
 For more details, please see the
-[release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/release.html).
+[release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/release/).
 
 **NOTE**: PostgreSQL 9.6 will stop receiving fixes on November 11, 2021. Please
 see our [versioning policy](https://www.postgresql.org/support/versioning/) for