Updates for the PostgreSQL 13 RC1 announcement.

diff --git a/releases/13/beta/13rc1.md b/releases/13/beta/13rc1.md
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--- a/releases/13/beta/13rc1.md
+++ b/releases/13/beta/13rc1.md
@@ -13,17 +13,18 @@ The planned date for the general availability of PostgreSQL 13 is September 24,
 Upgrading to PostgreSQL 13 RC 1
 -------------------------------
 
-To upgrade to PostgreSQL 13 RC 1 from Beta 3 or an earlier version of
-PostgreSQL 13, you will need to use a strategy similar to upgrading between
-major versions of PostgreSQL (e.g. `pg_upgrade` or `pg_dump` / `pg_restore`).
-For more information, please visit the documentation section on
-[upgrading](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/13/static/upgrading.html).
+To upgrade to PostgreSQL 13 RC 1 from earlier versions of PostgreSQL, you will
+need to use a major version upgrade strategy, e.g. `pg_upgrade` or
+`pg_dump` / `pg_restore`. For more information, please visit the documentation
+section on [upgrading](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/13/static/upgrading.html):
+
+[https://www.postgresql.org/docs/13/static/upgrading.html](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/13/static/upgrading.html)
 
 Changes Since 13 Beta 3
 -----------------------
 
-There have been many bug fixes for PostgreSQL 13 reported during the Beta 3
-period and applied to this release candidate. These include:
+Several bug fixes were applied for PostgreSQL 13 during the Beta 3 period. These
+include:
 
 * Adjustments to the costing model for hash aggregates that spill to disk.
 * Adjustments to the output of `EXPLAIN (BUFFERS)`.