Updates to PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 draft

...though I forgot why these changes were made.

diff --git a/releases/16/16beta1.md b/releases/16/16beta1.md
index fe36e8e2c8c56e28ad9d9d2050500bc03dabc636..71f2e492c6717fda7918ba3fa46d3fad4c68499f 100644 (file)
--- a/releases/16/16beta1.md
+++ b/releases/16/16beta1.md
@@ -37,9 +37,9 @@ aggregate functions. Additionally, PostgreSQL 16 can use incremental sorts in
 improvements in lookups for `RANGE` and `LIST` partitions, and support for
 "anti-joins" in `RIGHT` and `OUTER` queries.
 
-PostgreSQL 16 also has up to a 300% performance improvement when concurrently
-using [`COPY`](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/16/sql-copy.html)
-to bulk load data.
+PostgreSQL 16 can also improve the performance of concurrent bulk loading of
+data using [`COPY`](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/16/sql-copy.html) up to
+300%.
 
 This release also introduces support for CPU acceleration using SIMD for both
 x86 and ARM architectures, including optimizations for processing ASCII and JSON