Revisions to PostgreSQL 15 Beta 2 announcement

Reviewed-by: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>

diff --git a/releases/15/15beta2.md b/releases/15/15beta2.md
index f589cc3d74f2e166a4dcd776753745342fdc11e2..a41cfb342c85585df41af690c58f704d7a781393 100644 (file)
--- a/releases/15/15beta2.md
+++ b/releases/15/15beta2.md
@@ -4,22 +4,22 @@ This release contains previews of all features that will be available when
 PostgreSQL 15 is made generally available, though some details of the release
 can change during the beta period.
 
-You can find information about all of the features and changes found in
-PostgreSQL 15 in the [release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/release-15.html):
+You can find information about all of the PostgreSQL 15 features and changes in
+the [release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/release-15.html):
 
   [https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/release-15.html](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/release-15.html)
 
 In the spirit of the open source PostgreSQL community, we strongly encourage you
 to test the new features of PostgreSQL 15 on your systems to help us eliminate
 bugs or other issues that may exist. While we do not advise you to run
-PostgreSQL 15 Beta 1 in production environments, we encourage you to find ways
+PostgreSQL 15 Beta 2 in production environments, we encourage you to find ways
 to run your typical application workloads against this beta release.
 
-Your testing and feedback will help the community ensure that the PostgreSQL 15
-release upholds our standards of delivering a stable, reliable release of the
-world's most advanced open source relational database. Please read more about
-our [beta testing process](https://www.postgresql.org/developer/beta/) and how
-you can contribute:
+Your testing and feedback will help the community ensure that PostgreSQL 15
+upholds our standards of delivering a stable, reliable release of the world's
+most advanced open source relational database. Please read more about our
+[beta testing process](https://www.postgresql.org/developer/beta/) and how you
+can contribute:
 
   [https://www.postgresql.org/developer/beta/](https://www.postgresql.org/developer/beta/)
 
@@ -35,15 +35,14 @@ information, please visit the documentation section on
 Changes Since Beta 1
 --------------------
 
-There have been many bug fixes for PostgreSQL 15 reported during the Beta 1
-period and applied to the Beta 2 release. This includes:
+Fixes and changes in PostgreSQL 15 Beta 2 include:
 
 * `JSON_TABLE` output columns now use the collations of their data type.
 * `pg_publication_tables` now provides information on column lists and row filters.
 * Prohibit combining publications with different column lists.
 * `string` is now an unreserved keyword.
 * Several fixes for the output of `EXPLAIN MERGE`.
-* Multiples fixes for `COPY .. WITH (HEADER MATCH)`.
+* Multiple fixes for `COPY .. WITH (HEADER MATCH)`.
 * Revert ignoring HOT updates for BRIN indexes.
 * Internal fix for amcheck.
 * Fix for `psql` to show `NOTICE` statements immediately, not at the end of a
@@ -65,12 +64,12 @@ Testing for Bugs & Compatibility
 --------------------------------
 
 The stability of each PostgreSQL release greatly depends on you, the community,
-to test the upcoming version with your workloads and testing tools in order to
-find bugs and regressions before the general availability of PostgreSQL 15. As
-this is a Beta, changes to database behaviors, feature details, and APIs are
-still possible. Your feedback and testing will help determine the final tweaks
-on the new features, so please test in the near future. The quality of user
-testing helps determine when we can make a final release.
+to test the upcoming version with your workloads and testing tools to find bugs
+and regressions before the general availability of PostgreSQL 15. As
+this is a beta release , changes to database behaviors, feature details,
+APIs are still possible. Your feedback and testing will help determine the final
+tweaks on the new features, so please test in the near future. The quality of
+user testing helps determine when we can make a final release.
 
 A list of [open issues](https://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/PostgreSQL_15_Open_Items)
 is publicly available in the PostgreSQL wiki.  You can