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author | Michael Paquier | 2022-01-25 01:49:48 +0000 |
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committer | Michael Paquier | 2022-01-25 01:49:48 +0000 |
commit | acd4f44fe1ab9da325f508a5d37a542e593d2822 (patch) | |
tree | 61f93b1b380229ac7ebd932a650854bfde42f5b1 /doc/src | |
parent | 4ec54498c5eae338bbc8ce391df4297c314624ff (diff) |
doc: Fix some grammar
This is an extraction of the user-visible changes done in 410aa24,
including all the relevant documentation parts.
Author: Justin Pryzby
Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20220124030001.GQ23027@telsasoft.com
Backpatch-through: 10
Diffstat (limited to 'doc/src')
-rw-r--r-- | doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml | 7 |
2 files changed, 4 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml index 8fcbdb6b4b6..2084c7fa3ca 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml @@ -1975,7 +1975,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are: streaming starts on timeline <replaceable class="parameter">tli</replaceable>; otherwise, the server's current timeline is selected. The server can reply with an error, for example if the requested section of WAL has already - been recycled. On success, server responds with a CopyBothResponse + been recycled. On success, the server responds with a CopyBothResponse message, and then starts to stream WAL to the frontend. </para> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml index 9a4a03d1475..488372e4769 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml @@ -83,9 +83,8 @@ PostgreSQL documentation <listitem> <para> First, scan the directory where the WAL segment files are written and - find the newest completed segment file, using as starting point the - beginning of the next WAL segment file. This is calculated independently - on the compression method used to compress each segment. + find the newest completed segment file, using as the starting point the + beginning of the next WAL segment file. </para> </listitem> @@ -93,7 +92,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation <para> If a starting point cannot be calculated with the previous method, the latest WAL flush location is used as reported by the server from - a <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command. + an <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command. </para> </listitem> </orderedlist> |