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Awkward wording in GH-111835 whatsnew entry #114364

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"it requires" is a little unclear

diff --git a/Doc/whatsnew/3.13.rst b/Doc/whatsnew/3.13.rst
index 40f0cd37fe..eb00e4ad74 100644
--- a/Doc/whatsnew/3.13.rst
+++ b/Doc/whatsnew/3.13.rst
@@ -259,8 +259,8 @@ mmap
 ----

 * The :class:`mmap.mmap` class now has an :meth:`~mmap.mmap.seekable` method
-  that can be used where it requires a file-like object with seekable and
-  the :meth:`~mmap.mmap.seek` method return the new absolute position.
+  that can be used when a file-like object with seekable is required. The
+  :meth:`~mmap.mmap.seek` method now returns the new absolute position.
   (Contributed by Donghee Na and Sylvie Liberman in :gh:`111835`.)

I'm not sure if I should make a PR changing Doc/whatsnew/3.13.rst directly or something via Misc/NEWS.d

This refers #111852

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  1. ericvsmith commented on Jan 21, 2024

    @ericvsmith
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    Wouldn't "... when a seekable file-like object is required" sound better?

    I'm not sure what file you should modify.

  2. terryjreedy commented on Jan 21, 2024

    @terryjreedy
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    The What's new should be edited. If the 3.13.0a?.rst file has the same or similar verbiage, edit it also. Look at the dates of the files and of the merge to guess which.

  3. changed the title [-]Awkward wording in :gh:`111835` whatsnew entry[/-] [+]Awkward wording in GH-111835 whatsnew entry[/+] on Jan 21, 2024
  4. technillogue commented on Jan 21, 2024

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    Wouldn't "... when a seekable file-like object is required" sound better?

    maybe "when a file-like object with a :meth:~seekable method is required."? they always had seek()

  5. added a commit that references this issue on Feb 1, 2024
  6. added a commit that references this issue on Feb 11, 2024
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